Learning to make fuzzy writing more focused.

Today in class we watched a funny, but boring movie clip in class from the famous Ferris Bueller's Day Off film. The students had to add some details and emotions in their rewriting of the scene to create a more focused writing piece. The students used descriptive words such as the frustration and boredom of the students during the attendance taking. Overall Great job guys and remember to focus all of your writing pieces to make a quality descriptive picture in the readers mind.